Show not Tell.

By Anonymous -
In room 5 we have been writing narrative and in our narrative we have been doing show not tell so to get it right we had to get a simple  sentence and then writ it in to show not tell so this is what me and sami got.


Comments

  1. Miss B (Principal)1 November 2016 at 11:15

    I like the way you have described the log cabin. It has put a picture in my mind. I can't wait to see the rest of your story. Ka pai!

    ReplyDelete

Post a Comment

Popular posts from this blog

Candle Alarm Clock

By Anonymous -
Image
Group Members Britney Zoe Julia The world is full of electrical technologies that help our lives. Magnetic locks, spark plugs, fuse boards, motors, speakers, touch pads, the list goes on! Your group is going to be designing , making and testing an invention. This is something that uses electricity to do a job or solve a problem . Some ideas for inventions are here You can try one of those, or your own idea but make sure you run it by your teacher first. Lesson 1: Our Goal What are you going to try to make? A Candle alarm clock Has it been checked by the teacher? Yas Lesson 1: Our Plan Draw a diagram of how you think your invention is going to be assembled. The diagram should be good enough someone else could make it the same way as you.       link What parts are you going to need? A candle wires a metal can Battery buzzer ruler timer fire What safety concerns are there...
Read more

Palin

By Anonymous -
We learnt about a game that has been around for over 1000 years. The game Palin comes for Chile. Palin is similar to hockey apart from the field is 200 meters long and 12 meters wide. We had to go down to the beach to get our sticks because that is what they use to play the game. I enjoyed having  to go down to the beach to try and find the sticks to play with. I didn't enjoy how cold it was when we played.
Read more

How to throw a netball

By Anonymous -
How to throw a Netball Focus : Create a procedure for teaching a throwing skill. Firstly, we followed the writing process so we stared planning so for that we had to think of what we would like do writ about I did a netball so after I stared writing my one so I had finished writing we had to go and practice the skill before we made the video when we could do the skill then we had to made a video of it we had to do it step by step we had to make lots of video until we got it right it took me about five times until I got how to throw a Netball or what we were writing about. Then we had to get two people from the class to come and help as video and to show to throw the ball to so you are not just throwing to ball to nothing and so you can show how to catch the ball to as wall as throwing the ball and at the end of my video I show how to shot a netball hoop and this is my video that I make with the help of Sami and Eilish. Plastic The video went well it was a bite hart not t...
Read more